Sunday, August 11, 2013

Stresino's Painting: Molecular Structure inspired Poem!

         

                 Not surprising that the impact of this painting can inspire the words to a poem!


The Poem can be found in the in the Meez forum :




Evolutionary Ancestral


Arriving Bundled Molecular Structures 
A large twitching cloud ;
Too weak
To speak 
Their minds they wander 
Aimlessly hoping 
To form opinions 
With Pea-sized Brains! 

Written for a painting piece- two weeks ago! 

(A revised Poem)

Evolutionary Ancestral

Arriving

Bundled Molecular Structures,

aimless
fidgeting clouds

too faint
to taint

with
an opening mouth

too weak 
to speak

aimless
twitching minds with

the growing pains
of pea-sized brains

(revisions by Edward Stresino a Modern Poet check out: )(www.skirmisheswithreality.blogspot.com)

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